I often find myself struggling in the acceptance of certain
behaviors, typically those who are ignorant to the world around them besides
their fulfillment of instantaneous wants from a click of a button. It’s this
judgment and search to understand the mentality of my peers and the use of the
all-powerful internet, which causes frustration that is reflected in my face
and ears. I come from an Irish descent and anger is shown through rosy cheeks
and ears, when emotions are bottled up. That’s why, for me, finding the balance
between emotions and numbness has been like a constant tug-of-war.
A few days ago, I had an executive meeting with an
organization. Usually, the president brings up the main points of the objectives,
but the fundraising exec keep interrupting and only voiced his problems and
concerns with opinionative, passionate comebacks. For some reason my cheeks and
ears flared-up to the point of a violent, rapid heart rate. I had let the
behavior of one person upset me to the point of distress. Why? Why had I let
myself feel so strongly about this? His quick comments and cutting attitude
gave the realization of awful communication skills.
There you have it, my generation the one that grew up with
the internet, cell phones, and other high-advanced technologic gadgets. We are
slowly losing the knowledge and ability for words spoken beyond an electronic,
glowing screen that says ‘Comment’ ‘Post’ or ‘Like.’ I have often been prey to
his form of technology, but I am in shock when my peers talk in one-sided
conversations. This involves the competition of who had the craziest stories or
experiences happen to them.
These high-powered systems are nearly dehumanizing us. Sometimes,
I might running away with my emotions to the point of my own torment, but if we
are always consuming each other for materialistic gain, are we then becoming
numb?
This is good, I like the way you describe how technology is "dehumanizing" us. I like it, it is very well written.
ReplyDeleteThis was an interesting take on how technology is effecting our generation! I would like to point out that there are a couple of problems with some tenses changing, and just a few minor mistakes that could be corrected with another quick read through! This is definitely an idea that you could expand on, and I think it would be a good idea to anchor your thoughts and comments somehow within the scene of the executive meeting. Make the actions and comments of that boy work into your commentary, as well as just other things going on around you!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you wrote on this! It sounded the other day like this is something you feel really passionately about. I like the parts about how you get red when you get mad. Details like that help include you in the piece instead of it just being about technology. A good addition would be what is your technology use like. Do you try to stay away from it completely? Only use it when necessary? There is so much passion in this piece, I love it!
ReplyDeleteEven though I am quite technologically oriented, I cannot agree more with this piece. It seems that the most valuable currency one can acquire is the amount of "likes" on a Facebook post. While you make it clear how you feel about those who misuse technology, I can't help but wonder if you feel that way about technology in general or simply those who cannot handle it maturely. Perhaps elaborate on that a bit further.
ReplyDeleteI like the stuff here that's most specifically about you and your experiences. Since this is a really well-worn topic, including your specific take is essential. So, yeah, get us in this scene and theorize about whether phones are to blame for this person's behavior. How so?
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